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in my world god makes the movies and he hasn't made a good one in awhile
hank

jumped outta heavy white sheets for this one
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ran barefoot through two doors
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first has to be real silent (impossible)
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second who cares cause you're on the otherside
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15 Aug 17

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Fancy...

Incidentally, do they call redheads "Fanta Pants" in your country? I think that's a cute movie. Funny.
 — PollyReg

& the screen flickers

& the CLACKER closes on another shadow puppet show
 — unknown

i don't think so...about the 'fanta pants'
 — hank

ghosties¿

like a kilt
gotta wonder
what's underneath
 — unknown

describing my house
 — hank

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