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Blips and bleeps
neverthehero

What I might
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Like
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Doesn't matter
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As sitters do
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And layers fart
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While I
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Trip on the soul
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And others begin
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Over again
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As I
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Write
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Off the slips
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Of those
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That slither
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Inside what
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I think
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Is the white
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Picket
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Fence
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Of everyone's
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Day
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26 Sep 17

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Nice trip in words. this is writing where the words are happy together.  non-poets don't get that.
 — cadmium

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