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"gen why" response (reaction poem)
impoppy

the bitch said to me
 1
she'd gut me like a fish
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but i knew she wouldn't
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she couldn't shes a bish
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(nicki minaj rap bit now)
 5
 
 
takin' the fish outta my bish
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whats up why you talkin so rish
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I ain't got time for complainin
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so restraining
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my booty pants don't need no training
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do the right thing girl,
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you know what it is
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bang bang bang
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get rid of that jizz
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(back to me)
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i learnt my lesson
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to masterbate
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no point in love
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when you don't want to procreate
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all relationships are gonna sink
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so gonna have to do a rethink
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(snoop dogg comes in)
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HANDS IN THE AIR YALL
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1 Oct 17

Rated 10 (10) by 1 users.
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Inactive (0): 10

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for every reaction, there is an equal and opposite action. flush.

i like the play in this, and probably that's the level most poets work on, since just telling a version of the truth doesn't take any soul. i play too.
 — cadmium

everything that is flushed will come out the other end from the other end and that is the end
 — impoppy

ooh. profound. but, i meant that my face flushed in embarrassment that you'd written the greatest effective poem ever written. that's why i gave this a ten.
 — cadmium

"i like the play in this, and probably that's the level most poets work on," i play too :)
 — impoppy

bitch-fish-bish is good.
'masterbate' - procreate is seminal.
 — cadmium

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