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So me to be you

putting your shoes in mine
footprints just do it
hard to pace
we drop confidence
choose to walk inward
run the stairs
you become i
prove wrong
what it's like to be ourselves

2 Nov 17

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nice concept.
 — cadmium

I love the way you turn inside out with your words, the concept of "walking in another's shoes." A new take on an old phrase. :)
 — lyrycsyntyme