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a new year evolution

i shiver thanking you
for arousing a rotting ingenuity
last season's loss crisps tomato
bleeding my pen mustard
a winter sun betrayal
falling out black petals
gloom in bloom
when the cold envelopes
forgetting a long wait to summer
i introduce my tropical inner child
a favourite sanctuary you would replace
i could look at your tantrum unconditionally
playhouse mess on a wolf moon
a perfect cliché of 'i thought you're different'
flowers burn my new year evolution

3 Jan 18

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I really like this!
 — ssensory

thank you. i tweaked a bit - still looks disconnected in the end. but it's just me. i'll let it wine & polish one day
 — unknown