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a new year evolution
chloris

i shiver thanking you
 1
for arousing a rotting ingenuity
 2
last season's loss crisps tomato
 3
bleeding my pen mustard
 4
a winter sun betrayal
 5
falling out black petals
 6
gloom in bloom
 7
when the cold envelopes
 8
forgetting a long wait to summer
 9
i introduce my tropical inner child
 10
a favourite sanctuary you would replace
 11
i could look at your tantrum unconditionally
 12
playhouse mess on a wolf moon
 13
a perfect cliché of 'i thought you're different'
 14
flowers burn my new year evolution
 15

3 Jan 18

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I really like this!
 — ssensory

thank you. i tweaked a bit - still looks disconnected in the end. but it's just me. i'll let it wine & polish one day
 — unknown

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