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waiting for a meteor to find us naked
spoilt

we fool around the infinity loop
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laughs through the belly
 2
synchronicity never would have imagined
 3
a anomalous perfection
 4
a sickening helix thrives
 5
furious helicopter bedroom ride
 6
of which passing trains fail to wreck
 7
there's more deeper than rock bottoms
 8
brains scatter sweet maths
 9
we hide in gravity of supermoons
 10
repeat numbers and defy
 11
the universe must be joking
 12

7 Jan 18

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I almost feel like perfecting this. I know it's not but the tweaks are refining it, I guess . Gracias
 — spoilt

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