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Life Passing
larrylark

There was  sudden tension then hush.
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Breath stilled.
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The rooms clouded memorabilia,
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sealed with trusted trinkets
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had gathered round a life fullfilled
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For one moment everything froze;
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absolute quiet.
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The door opened,
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air from a corridor swirled through.
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Unforgiving time woke up,
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carried on apace as it flew.
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15 Jan 18


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