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MGM light
cadmium

MGM lighting,
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soft, and time glows on --
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see them dance,
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see them cry,
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California dreaming people...
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it's a take... here we go,
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there we've been,
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Hollywood dreams us.
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night slept by,
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the moon and the stars,
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have all clocked out...
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we're alone and
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sleeping time's for keeping.
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pony gal,
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lets not waste
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the night sleeping.
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18 Jan 18


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okay, good start. But for a piece about light, personally I want some color, even if its a silver/greys (not sure of the time period), If its technicolor, give us some of that. Good launching pad
 — sixtywatt

this is a locked piece, for romantics -- for anyone who knows film lighting styles and how they're a character in the film.

for color, see my "quartet", where I try to show what synesthesia is like.

thanks.
 — cadmium

Evocative piece.
 — larrylark

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