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Pirates
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I swear like a pirate
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I dare to be violet
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Good imagery
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Comes natural
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  Something green would suit me well,
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But wouldn’t red look nice?
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Blue
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      Powder and films cover your face.
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Abandon all your money,
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And your moon.
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Kick up some goblin dust with me.
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It doesn’t matter where
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  I put the words as long
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As I put you and me
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                             There.
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This is a dissolution
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The picture
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Makes no sense,
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And so
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         We shatter
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It doesn’t matter where you put your
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Eyes
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       On me
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                I splatter
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                        To oblivion
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                                  The sea.
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20 Jan 18


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I always wanted to be a pirate but my plastic boat disappeared down the plug hole. Well constructed poem
 — larrylark

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