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Looking German
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They were all bigger than me
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and said I looked German.
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This was 1953.
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Sweets may or might not
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have been rationed.
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Not to mention
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all the still bombed out buildings,
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down at heel fashions.
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“Probably related to Hitler.” One said.
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“Someone told my gran down the launderette.”
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Even though Adolf had been Austrian
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I had to spend a year or so
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steering a careful course.
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Hid in shadows, took long cuts rather than short.
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Got to know every back alley.
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Found out of the way places,
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Derelict air raid shelters where I’d bunker down.
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It all faded away.
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They got older, so did I,
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Following other whims and fancies.
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Life sometimes leads us a strange dance.
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In my late teens at school, flirting with the Spanish language,
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i wore bright red shirts and talked a load of bull.
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No one linked me to Franco,
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or offered me out for a fist fight
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in the name of national pride.
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9 Feb 18

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nice wording in this. the wording makes it alive.
 — cadmium

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