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mixed in silence
vida

reach me in the morning,
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I've adored the lights
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peeking through the blinds
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reaching you, in the morning
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somethings aren't as poetic
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as the silence I've discovered,
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but I've written a hundred letters
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to capture this
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as the blinds shape the shadows
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that create...
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this awkwardly composed thought
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reaches me like memories in the dark
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and
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I ramble on to find you
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hidden in these words
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like a melody mixed in wine
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goodnight said the doctors
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goodmorning said your eyes
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20 Mar 18

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