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It stuck with me	1
That meaning	2
That correctedness	3

It stuck	4

It played on	5
That feeling	6
That immenseness	7

It played	8

It threw me	9
A reeling	10
Flock of sheepishness	11

It threw	12

No, it weighed	13
No, it really	14
Really weighed	15

Now,	16

It stays behind	17
That raking	18
That responsiveness	19

And forever...	20

15 Apr 18

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