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after
cadmium

after a certain black rainbow
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cresotes an angel... it forever exists
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in mountains, arc and edge, it is intricate to crystals:
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form and wish calcified...
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life and dream and boy and girl.
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i mean, love is real.
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after a certain moon... which means
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life likes motion, stars and black snakes
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arc like seas...
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the heavens break,
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fat men bleed;
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the virgin dies;
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memory erects.
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flash to a village built of ashes. passionate men,
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eager boys, presumptuous women....
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children with sticks move
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knight to queen's rook four. totem hive,
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totem pole. i mean, time implodes and what i
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see is now and now.
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after a certain exploding nuclear,
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all the imperfections hated by man are
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mollified: atoms to atom, stupid man to
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woman; boy to
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girl.
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24 Apr 18


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https://po etryandpoet.blog/2018/04/24/after-2/
 — cadmium

after another moon everything is different
 — percocet

I insert my penis in you as your mother in law
 — percocet

u still think that the people that are given everything have it better... u have no idea.
 — percocet

after a certain fuck u, means u get fucked.
 — percocet

yes, the moon is there to show that change is real and that small-minded opinions and fears are just a hang up. thanks for moving over.
 — cadmium

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