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Ghostboy
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I memorised him like a song I loved
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in high school, one I knew without error
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one I would sing perfectly out of tune
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with my head tilted to one side.
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It was as if I crawled inside his mouth
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through his undiscovered passageways
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where all his wounds were hidden;
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I watched them bleed a little before
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sewing them shut, but I knew they’d open again
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like any loose stitch in skin.
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It wasn’t just pain
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there was tenderness and love in him
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in his blood and bones and I swear it was all for me.
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I took it all in, so far in, so strangely
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and perfectly inside me as it traveled along my spine
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pressing soft untouched muscles
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that hissed with relief
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his lungs rising and falling with the tide,
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my heart eroding, but it was his soul I remember most,
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alive and raucous like the music of a hundred
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dead people dancing, perfectly in tune.
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25 Apr 18

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some very nice images in this.
 — cadmium

Thanks Mike, much better than salad. ;)
 — unknown

I imagine this is what a lynching felt like
 — percocet

should I stop u from literary lynching?  u made me feel bad when I read this.
 — percocet

my sister was a lincher
 — percocet

she would strap on dildos offa trees
 — percocet

and deepthroat lynch
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sry
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u r getting deepthroat lynched, what do u do?
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look at the amount of people here for you
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and don't count me
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u gonna sit in your "Privilege," of being free?
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go to syria
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my comments are common in syria
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frankie, who do u love?
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frankie luvs me

why did this make you feel bad, like lynching
i thought you were talking about lychees.
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