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Stars In Motion
larrylark

Whatever happened to those
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who rose through the floor
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into orchestra pits of cinemas?
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Playing familiar tunes
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they created an interlude
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among gilded decor.
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Some married coquettish usherettes.
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Others sought the gentle motion
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created by a rise and fall of notes.
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They bought houses with high ceilings
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so that their music might float among stars,
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whether their trajectory be up or down.
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11 May 18

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i like this, coquettish and stuff, nice one :)
 — jenakajoffer

oh hi larry-doodle
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V nice
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very good
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nice
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