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DeformedLion

jesus...
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aphrodite couldn't pluck your pubesoul
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your hyphen
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  like a penis
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  like a simile for
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  security
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not ashclouds and horoshima,
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  sushidik !
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expound virtue b
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glorious!
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ask for the cheese boa-
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ask for a t-bone
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  pretend your asscheeks are firmly
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  godly, and good golly
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don't rock a baby on your cock.
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tell your white ringed fellows that, tell
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yo get fucked cunt 6163!
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  say my name jesus
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tell me im pretty
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not just a particle of the divine
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18 Jun 18

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dark images
 — unknown

is this inspired by your travels?

i love sushidik and cheese boa
you are my kinda fk'd up, linus.
 — jenakajoffer

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