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When the wind blows

...	1
broken house	2
broken memories	3

time flew by	4
wistful winds come and go	5
the debris of dust	6
and the shackles of shells	7
is all that is left	8
of a life formerly lived	9

the life goes on,	10
on goes	11
longer and longer	12

goes on	13
waiting for no one	14

forever changing	15
forever waiting	16
what will sprang?	17

whatever will be?	18

alas, being, still.	19

With apologies in Entirety for mistakes.

Version 1.0: 21 June 2018.

21 Jun 18

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