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When the wind blows
Qayyum

...
 1
broken house
 2
broken memories
 3
 
 
time flew by
 4
wistful winds come and go
 5
the debris of dust
 6
and the shackles of shells
 7
is all that is left
 8
of a life formerly lived
 9
 
 
the life goes on,
 10
on goes
 11
longer and longer
 12
 
 
goes on
 13
waiting for no one
 14
 
 
forever changing
 15
forever waiting
 16
what will sprang?
 17
 
 
whatever will be?
 18
 
 
alas, being, still.
 19

With apologies in Entirety for mistakes.

Version 1.0: 21 June 2018.

21 Jun 18

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good punctuation for a talkative poem
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