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i am defeated for i have loved
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you
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hot and cold and wild
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air is swept
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further and farther
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the sun standing still
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weeps sacredly its highest expression
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all-sweat
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fires silence
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the whole tapestry woven
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both blinds
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screen splattering shards
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too much to say or couldn't
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like defeated for i have loved
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i
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a good thing to summer
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holding that space for rain
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there is soul to behold in thunder
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of moon and star cosmic syncretism
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—a single star in the arms of a crescent moon
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100 degrees into solstice
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may their flames be directionless
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eternal its arrival
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~as within so without
as above so below
as the universe so the soul~

6-14-18

24 Jun 18

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