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i am defeated for i have loved
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you
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hot and cold and wild
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air is swept
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further and farther
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the sun standing still
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weeps sacredly its highest expression
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all-sweat
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fires silence
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the whole tapestry woven
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both blinds
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screen splattering shards
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too much to say or couldn't
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like defeated for i have loved
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i
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a good thing to summer
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holding that space for rain
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there is soul to behold in thunder
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of moon and star cosmic syncretism
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—a single star in the arms of a crescent moon
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100 degrees into solstice
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may their flames be directionless
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eternal its arrival
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~as within so without
as above so below
as the universe so the soul~

6-14-18

24 Jun 18

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30 centigrade
 — unknown

"~as within so without/ as above so below/ as the universe so the soul~ ", is a very good sentence. Its style even looks like from the Bible. I wish the author tell me where it's due.
 — Roc1Knight

thanks, Roc1Knight. it can be found in ancient texts/priciples of the universe.

was compelled to include it in this poem specifically for some nagging/inexplicable deep connection.
    
 — unknown

thanks, Roc1Knight. it can be found in ancient texts/principles of the universe.

was compelled to include it in this poem specifically for some nagging/inexplicable deep connection.
    
 — unknown

why the line-breaks? what are they there for? is the poem's shape a picture of the ancient principles of the universe? i mean, beyond just world lit 101? like, are you god?? how can you exist after writing this?? didn't being turn inside out for you? am i your true self, talking to you now and asking where you think you are?

is this poem really so deep? it's not. did you invent a language to say what had never been said but always been said and misunderstood? it's just chunks of words used to build a castle to keep the deep cosmos out of your head. when you start writing two words at the same time and fucking them into a new word, you're a prophet. prophets are fukkers. prophets crap up the world.
 — cadmium

cadmium, i'm not saying the poem is deep - the connection is. seemingly consciousness made available to me the moment i wrote aligning reality. an ongoing evolution delineating self/higher self/universe and all the shit one goes through.

like this poem has been sitting/hiding for quite sometime and has no intention for attention. nonetheless, surprising to emerge out of the blue. appreciate your feedback.
 — unknown

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