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Dear wife
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Ive never even tried to write poetry or really anything else. I know its kind of dr seuse sounding and some of it may not go together quite right but my head is a mess right now so makes sense this would be to. I dont know why i even put it on here.

I never meant to hurt you,
 1
I really never knew,
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I never want you feel that way,
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Not even for a single day,
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You are the love of my life,
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The only one I would want to call my wife,
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I'm all alone except the thoughts in my head,
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Since you left my insides are dead,
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I lay awake every night,
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Alot of sadness and alot of fright,
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I miss waking up to your beautiful face,
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The feel of your warm loving embrace,
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I would give anything to keep my wife,
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Up to and including my own life,
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As I sit crying writing this down,
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My face is stuck with a permanent frown,
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In my heart you will always be,
 17
The only one ever meant for me,
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I pray that u will give me just one chance,
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I promise a life of endless romance,
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Through these tears I cannot see,
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I beg you my wife please don't leave me.
 22
Sincerely,
 23
Your loving husband
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6 Jul 18

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