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The makeup that life
 1
wears depends
 2
on nature’s hue choice.
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7 Jul 18

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nature's hooch?


...
the makeup you wear
is your stop
and
go;
telling who you will hate and have
envy to know.
 — cadmium

natures hue changed
 — unknown

Unknown,

Are you suggesting that I change the poem as below?

The makeup that life
wears depends
on nature’s hue changed?

or as

The makeup that life
wears depends
on nature’s hue changes?

Please advise.
 — unknown

changed was a typo sb  changes
 — unknown

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