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Hard star
DeformedLion

It's a creaky swinging door
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And I had a piss
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Drugs and alc supervised
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Then someone peed on a church wall
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That's my lyric that wants
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Like a child that screams and swings
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It creaky door childness
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All over the... Whatever.
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.
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Beyond the biopic
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I can say I luv her.
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She is a different girl to who I first saw
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And I haven't cut myself
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Down yet.
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Flowers thin out from feelings
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Water   aqua.   Brastraps
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Hardness of kicking my cock towards
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Her
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Kind of smiling with beauty
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Sometimes
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Picking it of desire
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Flouer behind twiddle ear
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I am Dylan I think
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Eh you are obvious and I am obvious
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The shroud I sew my mouth towards
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Murmurs and butterfly lovely
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'you know we will die dear'
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.
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I was an igloo
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And you were a fire.
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She is an igloo and I am an igloo too,
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Come at me
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Sun.
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11 Jul 18

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It's real hard to write a poem on phone from a bar with a beer and not a glass of red
 — DeformedLion

22 'flower'?

beer all's makes me queer, but wine makes me whine, or fine... something.

she's an igloo,
and i'm an igloo too,
cold but free,
come at me.
 — cadmium

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