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Need is a Strong Word
ehalburn

I was fighting a cardboard filter that refused to fit into its place.
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As you removed it from my hands you lowered your voice.
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“No Honey, like this,” you said,
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And resolved my domestic undertaking.
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“But I almost had it,” I said.
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I was scavenging through my purse to rectify an afternoon expense.
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When you saw my wallet in hand, you hastily rallied your own.
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“I got it, Lovely,” you said,
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And nonchalantly paid the tender.
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“But I had money,” I said.
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I was carrying an ill-shaped box from the carport to my door.
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Awkward in my grip, you misinterpreted a reposition for a struggle.
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“Let me, Sweetie,” you said,
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And relinquished me of my hand-held burden.
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“But it wasn’t heavy,” I said.
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I took a shower and thoughtlessly dabbed at my tangled hair.
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Upon entering, you held my face, gently pulled my knots, and frowned.
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“My poor girl,” you said,
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And pursued me with a brush.
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“I could’ve combed my own hair,” I said
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I was having a hard night, and you asked me if I needed you.
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Despite my protest, you disregarded my refusal and pleaded your cause.
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“Baby, don't be like that,” you said,
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And corralled me into your arms.
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“But I don’t need you...” I said
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“I know you don’t,” you said, “ I need you.”
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24 Jul 18

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very good poem wanting something
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