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Caged Bird Sings
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I feel restricted
 1
I try to fly, but before I can expand my wings to be lifted
 2
They hit the walls
 3
The barriers designed just for me
 4
Sometimes I ponder how this could be
 5
Was it destined?
 6
From an egg, was it known by a mind greater than my own
 7
That this would be my home?
 8
Or did I make a mistake
 9
Did I fall into a trap because of my lust for bait?
 10
Misfortune or fate
 11
I do not know
 12
But it seems there is nowhere for me to go
 13
I'm lonely from head to toe
 14
So here is my song
 15
I will sing at night
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And all the day long
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How I wish to be free....
 18

27 Jul 18

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i feel pretty.
 — cadmium

not strong enough bird connotations. do birds have toes  more likely talons
 — unknown

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