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The Drinking Competition!!!

I could make this good, but
I'm a little drunk, and
I had a good idea,
I just forgot it,
so give me a break!
I'm only drunk
cuz- u- can't
understand my writing...
If you weren't so dumb
you would get it!
Ima go read something
you've never read.
then I won't be so drunk
and you will learn.
I feel like sobering up,
but I then,
have to face you.
You have kids and a good job.
You have it made
while I was made to struggle.
fair enough,
I will only get a little drunk tomorrow,
and we will see who wins
The Drinking Competition!!!

8 Aug 18

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had a little drink thats gone to my head   lol
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