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The Drinking Competition!!!
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I could make this good, but
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I'm a little drunk, and
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I had a good idea,
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but
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I just forgot it,
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so give me a break!
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I'm only drunk
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cuz- u- can't
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understand my writing...
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If you weren't so dumb
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you would get it!
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Ima go read something
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you've never read.
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then I won't be so drunk
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and you will learn.
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I feel like sobering up,
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but I then,
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have to face you.
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You have kids and a good job.
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You have it made
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while I was made to struggle.
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fair enough,
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I will only get a little drunk tomorrow,
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and we will see who wins
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The Drinking Competition!!!
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8 Aug 18

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had a little drink thats gone to my head   lol
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