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When was the last time you undressed me?
unknown

i bathe to your attention
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mind glittering orange pink trickles
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sitting lotus wet
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i do belong
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lost to your orgasmic fire
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no beginning, no end
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take me higher in this sacred communion
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2 Sep 18

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Sacred writing very good
 — Rossant

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