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your face is a sad poem
JKWeb

crows leave footprints
 1
by your eyes,
 2
tears have dried here
 3
 
 
lines form from
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a smile, or a wince
 5
a blemish, a flaw
 6
fifty years of alcohol
 7
 
 
arterial frown lines,
 8
blood has trickled here
 9
 
 
the tilted mouth,
 10
the crooked teeth
 11
and the nose that knows
 12
not a thing
 13
 
 
of a face
 14
that begins
 15
to sag and strain
 16
 
 
the skin
 17
that burns in the sun
 18
and the desert remains
 19

20 Sep 18

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Well drawn portrait
 — larrylark

glad you think so Mr. Lark.  thank you.
 — unknown

Interesting piece on the effects of aging and experience.  Sad indeed.
 — unknown

thanks for reading unknown.  this was kind of inspired by Sylvia Plath's "Mirror"
-- such a great poem.
 — unknown

Good homage to Sylvia Plaith
 — Rossant

thanks much Rossant.  methinks she's one of the all-time greats.
 — unknown

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