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Blood Eagle
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I want to rip out your heart
 1
and eat it
 2
Toy with you in death
 3
the way you toyed with me in life
 4
I will elevate you through blood and art
 5
Like the bird of prey you are
 6
Watch your bony wings
 7
Reach out for the sky
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And kiss the burning heights
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You never could in life-
 10
I want to feel the exquisite wetness
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of your blood
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dripping sensually over my mouth
 13
As I rip open your chest
 14
Exposing all your insides
 15
To the careless elements
 16
Licking the gaping wound-
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I want your tender flesh to know
 18
the pain you dished out so effortlessly
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Without genuine thoughts of compassion for me.
 20
Without responsibility
 21
Without accountability
 22
No, none of it your fault.
 23
 
 
The hatred I feel for you
 24
Is purer than love.
 25

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Needs work, I know. Wrote this in a fit of anger. Lol

2 Oct 18

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Rorschach test.

You sit your gash
on apiece of A4
then fold it
in half;

"your lips" I say,
when you unfold
the square of paper
and ask, "what do you see."

"your red red lips."
 — unknown

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