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Love In The Rain
larrylark

We are still blissfully beautiful.
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I kiss you through the rain
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after searching for a suitable key.
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It's warm. We dream. Sky stands still.
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Seas gone quiet. Riots on the hillside ceased
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I ease my hand across your eyes
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but they are already clear.
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Pull myself closer.
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Water flows all round.
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I saunter to the back.
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Spare key rusting under mat.
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It pours, yet still we stand there.
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I even throw my hat into the air.
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28 Oct 18

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 — unknown

There's always another mountain to climb Rossant....fortunately i have vertigo and never even put  a foot on the bottom rung of a ladder

Larry plain wetlands and beaches Lark
 — larrylark

love it larry the stone larkman..
 — brother_sun

So sorry to see that u have been spammed, too... It's SO frustrating.  I'm sorry this is happening to us.  Great poem!
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Thanks brother sun...I'll meet you under the next full moon

Larry byond the ozone layer Lark
 — larrylark

Hi aforbing.

They can spam all they like but its not stopping us writing is it. We continue to follow our noble cause while they have obviously nothing better to do than use this site to try and sell the detritus and junk of a society thats conned into believing they need it, just so  others might profit.

Larry junk male Lark
 — larrylark

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