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You mesmerizing about fish eye
unknown

you mirror after a fascination to curls
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souls knowing beyond sight at zero point
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she is stunning simplicity
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how star stuff builds up longing to be spoken of
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ineffability stilling us
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a shoe drops
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grounding feet to such pull you gravitate involuntarily
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like hearts without muscles it pumps whenever
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there is sacred space
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shower of sunshine streaks
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time stops golden sparks blanketing mystery
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after mystery of flames firing within
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higher selves silence without
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playing between solar fields

3 Nov 18

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this was a pretty little ditty... I hope it doesn't get any spam like the rest of the offerings on here.  It seems that almost EVERY poem is plagued with it.
 — aforbing

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