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i have a dream
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i have a dream
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King was naive
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for racism can never be eradicated
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from hidden hearts
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as long as we have eyes
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to see.
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i have a dream
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i swallowed the sun
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and there were no days
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only nights
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fragile hearts
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and everyone was one color
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and free.
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the light will not set you free.  
darkness can eliminate distinction.
nocturnal equality.

7 Nov 18

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Deep... I love it. >>>Eracism!!
 — aforbing

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