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the perfect woman
unknown

would be a six foot
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scandinavian
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with skin like hot sand
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rastafarian locks
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shanghai eyes, doll sized feet
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gyrating latin hips
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breath of cinammon or tumeric
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fragrance of a botanical garden
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all topped off
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with an irish
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brogue.
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but all i have is you
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in stilletos
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swaying and mumbling libido loca
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boasting a fake tan
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bloodshot eyes
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droopy eyelids
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two braided locks
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an orchid behind your ear
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about to barf
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a whiskey and coke
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last nights
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broccoli and sesame chicken.
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la vida loca
"you can't always get what you want, you get what you need"

2 Dec 18

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