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New Light
jacobthel1ar

I hate this new light.
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Only way to see darkness / It’s just a reflection
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How could I see the void
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But for this pale glow / It’s empty inside.
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Despise the darkness, but damn it's easier to hide.
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How does the moon give light without the absence of you / so bright.
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You Were:
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Gone for 3 days, as the moon.
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You Were:
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Here once, was it a dream / it’s all a daze
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All I have / becomes / known
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All I have known / becomes / home
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You Were
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Somebody’s Savior
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Are you still mine!!!
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This moon does not wrap me in light
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It just sun from the other side.
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I feel some warmth / But no comfort
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Even turned away, not wanting me to fall
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It still guides
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You Were:
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Somebody’s Savior
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Are you still mine!!
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You Were:
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Somebody’s Savior
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Come back to life!!!
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Now I know why you had to die!
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And now I know why you had to die!
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Don’t go, Don’t go
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I won’t hide
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It was just like you said, you can not turn away, there is nowhere to hide.
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8 Jan 19


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