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Animism vs Dualism
chloee

I see the blades of grass dance
 1
And I know not of the Wind
 2
So in my mind they dance for me
 3
And I begin to dance for them
 4
 
 
I see the water in the ocean reaching out for me
 5
Knowing not of Logic I can clearly hear it sing in breeze
 6
And I understand the language used
 7
And means for which it speaks
 8
 
 
I sing back to it
 9
In a higher pitch
 10
And a rhythmic rhyme
 11
And then I sit and preach
 12
the gospel to the ocean tides
 13
 
 
Hear my words of wisdom
 14
Bellowing under the moon:
 15
“I know not of the Ego
 16
but I smile like I do.”
 17
If you could hear me now
 18
What would you think?
 19
Could this be true?
 20
Then the dualist answers
 21
“Why am I not you?”
 22

3 Mar 19

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