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The Thief
shwu

It came with guise of error to her eyes,
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And opening, made no apology,
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But when she hit the heart, to her surprise,
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A cloud from heaven swept her so high she
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Thought she saw the face of her salvation.
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That simple words could have such strong effect
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She knew, and in the warmth of their creation,
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She wondered how she could at first reject,
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The shimmer of the world no doubt revealing
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The hope behind the fear of being scarred.
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And so it was a thief one night came stealing
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The heart she'd spent her later years as guard.
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    Still mere words but strung such as they were,
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    A necklace meant for no one else but her.
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9 Jul 04


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