poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Random Poem:

Feel The Bass (She's In A Trance)
kazfernandes

Look around, enjoy the daze
 1
Colours mix and neon flares
 2
Life may be a tricky maze
 3
But look around, nobody cares.
 4
 
 
She smiles, she moves, she's in a trance
 5
Absorb the bass and hear the drums
 6
Asks me if I'd like to dance
 7
She's all good till daylight comes.
 8
 
 
Triple vodka, Triple J,
 9
Triple cheese, at you-know-where
 10
There is no reason left to stay
 11
No one said that life was fair.
 12
 
 
Kick that beat, and feel the bass
 13
Never feel the fear
 14
Take me to my special place
 15
But know it isn't here.
 16
 
 
Life's a beach, so where's the waves
 17
Love me, leave me, let me be
 18
Who ensures the world behaves?
 19
Love me, leave me, set me free.
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